Friday, February 5, 2016
The Balcony feeling!
Its a great evening here. The still but cool breeze, longing silence, and a very pleasing smell of vegetation around, I never realized I have such a beautiful Balcony in my flat. Believe me I have wandered many places, settings, seats that never gave me the sense of fulfillment to my ever wandering consciousness. Its funny, look its next to my room, near to the kitchen where I am enjoying the smell of tea that my mom is preparing for me. The infinite visibility around....! hmm.. I can hear each and every sounds, every decibels. I can see the every sparks of light moving and again disappearing. I think I am elevating, sublimating like I had never been before. I am simply observing everything, listening to every bits, interposing everything nature has given to itself. Who said its hard to witness, just witness, to be happy or just to feel happy? Did I just enjoyed the moment, like people say "Live the moment, Enjoy the moment"? I don't know but I have to go in now, my knees are freezing and, I can no more decline a tea-call from my mom.
Friday, October 9, 2015
The Resurgence
By: Mahesh Aryal
The Resurgence
She
was constantly sipping coffee, a strong one. The coffee did its finest work and
Anusha was not asleep while she caught the bell ringing clearly for once from a
distance that night. Some messy words in the laptop’s screen, similar kind of
preparatory in the writing and usual monologue. She always wanted to get out of
imagination and, realize all those moments that she had transpired into her
work as a writer. That is where the problem lies, being the personality for
real. May be writers, moreover, fiction writers don’t have a gut to be a real
hero. She went in the state of defenselessness. Then she chose to wisp a
cigarette and closed her laptop with an empty blank screen. Each moment man
runs for something either in imaginings or for reality. She was confused about
what she was running for, actually she was tousled about she was confused or not.
She had to write something because she couldn’t stay not writing. She always
wrote what she had felt, what she felt being part of her work with some crazy
imagination. What writers do when they are wedged in this kind of situation?
She did the same for few more hours, the revival of the story, she thought she
need a rational revival.
It
was not a decision in haste. She worked on some plans but she knew that
disposition never works in that kind of setting. It wasn’t a fiction she was
going to write. She hadn’t seen him for more than four years. Even after this
interval of time, her brain cells were still inculcating her body to excite, to
excite in search of that allure. Few years back, he was standing between his
friends. He was in navy blue
pants, long sleeved fitting white t-shirt with rectangular black buttons. He
was fair and smiling with curly hairs and the red-bordered spectacles. He spoke
very less but Anusha was busy trying to translate the thousands of words
radiated by him sitting at the corner of the college reception. She just
realized what she felt was so beautiful, very translucent. In words, they look
more beautiful, genuine. She knocked herself saying “it’s not a writer’s time”
and stopped oozing it out. But she got an approval from herself that it wasn’t
just a kind of forced act or compulsion. It was still a mystery, the revival of
her character.
It
was the evening of early September she sent him a friend request in Facebook.
Within a day the request got accepted. She found it quite easier than texting
him in his cell-number that she had stanchly copied from the student- info note
book from her college. She even had to bribe the receptionist with a good
snacks treat in exchange to his cell number. It looked like a frantic plot she
was working for. She was desperately prepared to unveil her words and he was
the one who would be beginning the new episode of his life. Actually, she was,
materializing the imagination.
“Hello
there!” She started with a very usual greetings. She kept staring the waving
blue dots in return for few more seconds.
“Hello”
he replied which was also very usual response on that much time.
“Ummm…”
she really couldn’t collect any words.
“?
:)” she received in a reply.
She
smiled for herself, grasped the breath and typed very firmly. He never knew
what was happening to her anyway. She was expecting few more interaction to
ease herself.
“Okay,
how are you doing? Tell me about your study, Kshitiz! ” She assumed that the
words were pretty confident then, which became none of use after he left
saying; all good... got to go, again with the smiley.
For
subsequent two days she got ample of time to contemplate. He didn’t appeared in
a chat and she didn’t show any courage to talk on the phone. She decided to
inscribe something. She just wanted to take an advantage of ‘Put what you feel
in the paper’. She didn’t like that inkling but the writer transpired out and
became busy to explain the reason of resurgence, attached her blog URL and told
him to read the story she had once written for him.
Next morning there was
something in her inbox.
“I read the story, was the
message a part of promotion of your blog? I am still not believing it,
how can I be part of your story?”
She was really excited by the
initiation of talks. He was handsome enough to make her fall for him. She
didn’t have much talks with him. If the words are to be written here it would
roughly contain 100 words. Most of the words were very formal because of her
introverted nature. It was really hard time for her to manage all that whim.
They were to be expressed but she didn’t find any better way. Then she worked
for 3 a.m. in one of the morning four years back and wrote a fiction (story)
characterizing him which concluded with some happy ending.
She didn’t know why she was
acting like as if she was just up to the writing. Her words were clearly
implying those things. She was not so sure whether her words affects him or
not. After all these years the words mightn’t be sufficient to make something
out of people but they can’t ignore words. The words are always expression of
something and people always have respect for the work even if the writers are
less interesting in person. She assumed that he was capable enough to
understand the yawning indications. He kept answering her and she was very
happy about that.
“So Kshitiz, Do you really
think the character is you?”
“Actually I was surprised to
know that I had an impression on you! I read the story. I felt your character
is me at many points like, selection of characters named Kush Bhatt, the
character wearing nerdy glasses and obviously, that college uniform!”
“Yeah, I was pretty much
impressed by you and your nose. It was really wonderful, those specs looked
really cool in that nose…I’m sorry! :)!”
“Ha-ha, I got the person who
talks good about my glasses, thank you, this is the first nice compliment I
have ever heard about my nerdy look, believe it or not!”
It is true, praising someone
really works. She was enjoying warming conversation. After all, she was
interacting with the boy, the sweetest boy she could ever dream of. She
couldn’t believe the way things became perfumed like that.
“Hello there! How was the
day?” She was really excited for the talk.
But she got null responses. A
kind of bad feeling hemmed in her and the intensity became quite high and she
typed: “Was it really a silly question to ask?”
After all she received tons
of response. She didn’t expect that twist in her story. Initially, she didn’t
get any words then she went twice through it. She couldn’t believe it was his
words. How could he have such words with her after all these things? The
words were busy criticizing her work, with preposterous negativity. She felt it
was simply unacceptable. She already thought of giving up the whole thing.
But she felt it was the worst way to end.
“Was this all the strategy ‘get rid
of’?” She had both annoyance and nervousness. She kept on waiting for the
reaction. But nothing appeared for next two days. But whatever she saw was out
of her thoughts. First few messages clearly spoke “Get the hell away….” But the
last message appeared very different and was again unanticipated one -
“Umm….Sorry actually, that
was her. That criticism was not mine. I am avid reader and fiction draws me
too. I am the fan of fiction writing, so I liked the story when you said you
wrote it imagining me. I am really sorry to each and every words. There is no
meaning in criticizing you. If I have to say something I will choose suggestion
instead of criticism. I know that you know how it feels when someone writes
with such fascinating words to his boyfriend. It’s not any kind of stratagem.
Its reality, she loves me and I do the same. We are in a relation since some
years and we can’t stop looking each other’s stuffs. That is it. And, never
think that you are creating any disturbance to me. I read articles on your
blog, they are really nice reading, that was all I wanted to say and remove the
misunderstandings.”
She didn’t have enough reason
to create unworthy twist in the story then. She sat on the floor with the
littered papers. She shuffled all those papers and mixed them thoroughly. With
her hands in her unwashed dry hair, twisting the strands, she stood up. She was
known about his relationship. She smiled at herself because it was a new
dimension to her work, ludicrous one. She accepted it was a failure for her but
she convinced herself-it was indeed a happy ending. It’s their strong relationship
that defeated her affection for Kshitiz. She knew that she would be fine just
having those words transformed into her work. There is no such thing like,
winning and losing ends in so called love, it is always winning.
Thanks for reading!
Saturday, August 22, 2015
The girl with a Thai-hair cut
"She looked really pretty among the girls and few boys. We were there to celebrate the Saturday morning. A morning after rain, laughter of my friends under Jacaranda tree and its floating smell, the combination was wonderful. The maroon colored sun was uplifting the soul of everything. Green leaves, wet purple blue flowers, dewdrops down on the grass, somersaulting children (One of them was me) and many more…was reflecting each and every colors. And the experience was like inhaling a real ecstasy.We were circling the tree with a hand curved in the stem, sliding on the bark…One after another……another after that one…..with the giggles.....can't realize who was chasing whom. Between them she was the beautiful one, her waving hairs with Thai-cuts, her delighting expression."
Woah, I just realized it was my childhood crush. This very picture rolled in my head today when I saw a little girl with bunch of children playing and giggling. It was probably one of the best moments of my childhood but I am not sure if it really happened. Anyway we all had moments ; sweet or bitter. The only thing we have do is relate and connect :)
Woah, I just realized it was my childhood crush. This very picture rolled in my head today when I saw a little girl with bunch of children playing and giggling. It was probably one of the best moments of my childhood but I am not sure if it really happened. Anyway we all had moments ; sweet or bitter. The only thing we have do is relate and connect :)
Friday, May 30, 2014
It was She.
Writer: Mahesh Aryal
Chapter: 1(Late night call …….)
"Kush baby, aren’t you going to bed today?"” Bimlesh cried to me as I was disturbing him sitting late night.
"Kush baby, aren’t you going to bed today?"” Bimlesh cried to me as I was disturbing him sitting late night.
“Yup, five minutes more Bimlesh to close my assignment
file, just five minutes more." I acted as if I was doing something like
crime sitting so late and apologizing for that.
One
thing about the homework’s and project works is that you can give a time to it
only a night before its presentation.
Beep…!
Beep….! The mobile rang on my study table. I found myself hanging on the table
sitting in a chair.
I
adjusted myself and again dozed .Beep…! Beep………! The mobile rang again.
“Who
the hell…… is that at this midnight?" I difficultly opened my eyes and
shouted.
Beep…!
Beep….! The mobile rang again. There
were already four missed calls .I felt the phone ringing more loudly than
usually.
“Ass…..”
I murmured. At last I reached my cell phone.
“Hello,
who is that?”
“Hi,
I am Anushka, are you Shreya?”
Girrrrrrrrl….I
became quite excited and became awaken. I
don’t know what boys find something exciting in girls.
“Sorry,
I am Kush and I really don’t know the Shreya you are searching for.” I answered
her in a sorry voice.
“Don’t
you know she works in Nabil bank, Kathmandu?”
I clarified her that there is no such person over there.
The next day I became ready for
my college as usual. Before leaving my room I stood in front of mirror and
smiled looking my image.
“Is there any girl for this
guy? “, thinking that I went to college that day but couldn't forget yester-night’s conversation.
Chapter: 2 (The college girl)
“Hello, Can I
get the way?" a college dressed young girl cried next to me.
She was in
navy blue skirt, grey shirt with same colored sweater. Her face was partly
covered with a green scarf.
“Huh!"I
replied.
“I am sorry,
Can I get the way?”She asked for a way to have next to me.
It was my usual college trip after I joined +2
in Kathmandu. But there were many usual but inconvenient experiences about the
college trips on city buses. One is that you can't get city bus in time;
another if you get it fortunately you can't have a seat. Luckily, it was a rare
lucky day for me.
“Yeah, get
it please?"I replied.
I gave her a
seat next to walking lane and took a sit next to her near to the window. I
thought my trip was going to be interesting one. But there was also a reason in
choosing a seat next to the window because you can enjoy the scenario if you
haven't anything interesting to do. It's better than remaining silence for
minutes like hours when you are next to a stranger.
She was
wearing grey stockings which paired my pants. She was fair and smiling with
curly hairs, part of it was sticking on her nose with the specs.
The very
boring thing happened then. I looked towards the window, she turned away. We
were very helpless to start a conversation .I stared her image at the windows. I felt as if she was also looking at me.
One thing
about the presence of girl next to you have a certain type of induction which
makes you feel serious and thinking something. Moreover if a beautiful girl
sits next to you, you may feel fixed in your seat.
She gave me
a strange look. I again removed my eyes to the walls of the bus. She was
engaged on her cell phone.
I felt that
she was giving me damn care.
I thought to
ask her where she was going and what was the time, she suddenly stood up to get
off from the bus.
“Bullshit"
I said in a very small volume. I didn't know how that word came.
“What?”She
cried.
“Oh! Not
anything, bye!" I replied smiling. She also smiled in a surprise and
departed. That was the only sucking smile I get from her that day.
The days
went on like that. The busy schedules, exploiting integration, I had nothing to
do except that.
Chapter: 3 (Again
a Call…….)
One night I
had a phone call again.
I picked it
up and started.
“Hello who
is that?”
“I am that
who you may not have known or forgotten, do you remember Anushka?"
“Oh! Hello, I
am sorry I could not recognize you."
I am in surprise why boys feel so fast sorry
in front of girls.
A silence remained for few seconds but I hated
silence.
“How do you
do, Anushka"
“I am at least
fine, you felt disturbed that night. I am calling you to apologize for that night.”
"Nup! That’s
not a problem and what is in that at least. Are you ok fren! , Can I say you
friend?” I tried to make us friendlier.
“That’s not
your problem fren...I felt better with that fren."
“Yup, not
much older to solve all that, am I right Miss Anushka.” I felt something close to her.
“Better to
say bye Kush, keep on calling.”
She hung up I
think giving damn care to me.
Chapter: 4 (Again
that College Girl)
After few
days the same silent girl seemed in a bus. She had a physics practical note and
a book with a big bold E=mc2 on her right hand, and a blue
bag on another hand. The big problem was that I didn’t have any vacant seat
next to me. She was trying to make her easy by leaning on the seat next to me.
I didn't show any courage to ask her to have seat or ask her to give me her
books to hold.
“Hi, can you
hold this bag for minutes." She asked me for help.
I became
quite nervous about an idea of help but I ejected my hands to hold her bag. I
became sure that she had forgotten our previous boring trip. I also told her to
give her book also but she denied.
“Give it to
me.” I told her as I felt that she was
feeling difficulty to stand with those books. I did not know why this feeling
of pity came for her .She gave me her books then. I relief reflected from her
beautiful eyes. I stared to them for few more seconds.
“Hello Can I
get my bag.”She said in a thankful voice.
"Thank
you ....."She said and took her things.
She leaved
the bus in the same station at Gausala as before.
I gave her a
welcome smile .I found a card on the floor named Anu Bhatia. I found the vast
differences in her real self and photograph.
Chapter: 5, (Kush gave a call…….)
“Hello, Anushka
how are you, Fine?”
“Oh! Kush
thanks for remembering me!”She screamed in a loud voice.
"How
was your day…?"
“Fine and yours..!”
“As usual…"
“And how
about your study buddy, what are you studying, where?" she asked.
"Management
at Gausala….!”
"Oh I
am at Chabbhil "she told me as if she was very happy.
“In which
level Kush "she asked me.
“Eleven……” I
feel proud thinking that I am grown up now.
“And you?”
“Same level,
science but I am not good one.” She answered with her beautiful laugh.
"Seeeeeeee
you, my mama is coming.” she tried to end the call.
“Wait why
are you so hurry to say bye every time, I…..”I tried to stop her to hang up.
“Better to
chat next day, bye…Good night.’’ She cut my sentence and hung up.
We began to talk to each other once a day
usually. We shared problems and other personal stuffs. In our chatting we usually have question
like how was the day, how was your presentation, why are you listening
depressed today! When are we meeting? Etc. I really felt she wanted me but I was
not so serious about that. The problem was that I have not seen her.
Chapter 6:
(A Situation ………..)
As usual the
days were normal. One day I met Anu Bhatia. That day she was next to me across
the walking lane. I called her and gave her id card. After that silence broke
off and a new friendship started. I used to reserve her seat or help her by
holding her bag and sometime leaving a seat for her. I don't know how I began
to like her. One day I proposed her. I didn't expect ‘no’ but it was a big ‘NO’."
It is not love Mukesh it is only a friend ship." she answered me.
I don’t know how girl feels so easy to say
these lines.
She also
told me that she was in love with someone else.
Chapter: 7(Its a real situation ……..)
I didn't answer Anushka’s call for next four days.
Yeah, it is really hard to bear agony of rejection.
The next
morning a phone call came.
“Hello Kush
this is Anushka, what happened to u huh? Why are you not receiving my phone and
what do think, Can you give up your friend easily?” She cried on me in anger
tone.
I told her that I had just faced a rejection
and sorry for not receiving phone calls of her. I cried in front of her first
time.
“Don’t you
feel someone really cares for you?”She said me.
She called me to meet each other for the first
time.
“Don’t you
feel I am mean?" I asked her.
“Whatever it
be I want you and I will wait for you. Ok, see you at 5 tomorrow at dream garden.”
I also felt
that I need her.
"Love you,
Anushka” I cried.
“You are a
boy Na, I will be there waiting for u.”She laughed at me.
“Good night
and care you” she said.
"Same
for u” I replied.
Chapter: 8 (It’s
going to be A PASSIONATE CLIMAX)
Next morning
I became ready to usual trip to my college but it would be different one
because I goanna see her and that would be a new daybreak in my life.
Anu was also on same bus with her college
uniform in addition she was wearing a heart shaped big hair clip but almost at
last seat. As usual she left at the same stop.
At 5:00, I reached dream garden and bought a ticket.
I went inside. I never imagined it was such a gorgeous place. But I was only
expecting her.
I saw a girl with the rose wearing college
dress like Anu wears. With my throbbing heart, I went to her.
“Anushka…!"
I called her. She turned to me. I didn’t believe it was the same Anu.
"Oh!
Kush…...”
She came to
me and gave me a tight hug I never felt before and kissed and kissed.
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